Dragonflies with magic steel wings
17 Aug 2011
By popular demand, here is the latest installment from my writerly nephew.
He has recovered his mojo after the last battle with the definition of ‘narrative‘.
Thanks to everyone who commented and buoyed the boy!
Aug 17, 2011 @ 21:08:12
Firstly, my dad’s name was Patrick so I’m a bit thrilled that you chose that name for the fastest and bravest dragonfly!
Secondly, what a great story – I was sitting on the edge of my seat. Would love to see a picture of the magic steel wings :)
Aug 17, 2011 @ 20:58:33
ah the joy!
Beautiful.
my heart sings.
the talented writer boy writes again.
again with a beginning, a middle, some rocking suspense (“only one thing to do”) and an end.
Thrown in for good measure some kicking heroics provided by Patrick’s metal wings of awesomeness!
It’s better than great work….to overcome that hurdle and write again is nothing short of magnificent.
I want you to know that your stories are WONDERFUL, magical and engaging.
Some adult writers never get to that point.
x
Aug 17, 2011 @ 20:52:58
Patrick is the buttkickingest dragonfly I know.